Potential.
Ehm.. well even though the voices were quite ehh.. poor shall we say (childlike and crackly mics) i suppose its likely that there isnt many other ways you could have done it. so Kudos for the bravery to put your own voices on there.
Plot um.. didnt make too much sense and overall wasnt very good.
animation itself wasnt TOO bad. but could also do with a polish.
keep trying :)